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A brief Synopsis:

Christmas Eve is my first project. I'm very new to visual novel development, but I am learning more and more every week. I began this project at the beginning of August 2022 thinking (foolishly) that I could crank 4 chapters out by Christmas. Well, that didn't work out, did it? Oh well, no worries.

Christmas Eve is the story of a single father  (MC) and his stepdaughter, Evelynne  who are on a road trip just before Christmas. They end up making an unscheduled stop during a snowstorm and stay in a cabin for a few days. Romance blooms as the dad not only struggles with the changes in the relationship between him and his stepdaughter, but also finally  starts to come to terms with his late wife's passing.

When you're done with this adventure, come check out the sequel, New Year's Day(e )

This project is currently being considered "complete" at v1.0.0, however there are tentative plans to redo some of the less desirable images and/or "animations".

If you'd like to help support me and my work, feel free to follow this link to Buymeacoffee. I really appreciate it!

Come hang out with me on Discord and talk about the game - https://discord.gg/dVq9NBHQC5

Show your support over on Patreon and get some cool perks and/or goodies. https://www.patreon.com/user?u=81117637


StatusIn development
PlatformsWindows, macOS, Linux
Release date Oct 14, 2022
Rating
Rated 4.4 out of 5 stars
(70 total ratings)
AuthorJonesy
GenreVisual Novel
Made withRen'Py
TagsAdult, Christmas, corruption, Erotic, Male protagonist, Ren'Py, Romance, seduction, Story Rich
Average sessionAbout an hour
LanguagesEnglish
InputsKeyboard, Mouse
AccessibilitySubtitles

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Is New Year's Day available yet? If so can someone please link me to it?

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Yep! Chapter 1 is anyway. Here you go. Thanks for playing!

Thank you! Can't wait to play. Keep up the great work!

Can you install this without a mega account?

Hey! You shouldn't need to sign up with Mega just to download. It should do a "pre-download" and then actually download the file really quickly once it reaches 100%. I dunno why it works this way, it just does.  I hope this helps!

Whenever I click download I get a pop-up that says "you are not logged in"

When i try it i get the choice: open in Mega App or Open in Browser. Choose open in browser and you shouldn't have any problems.

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Hello Jonesy  I think it's really good that the game is well received by everyone. Take your time to make the game super good , but please do not waste too much time . Christmas Eve has a good story board. Please keep it up and you will be a great game developer . hawaii4560 / aloha
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While I didn't play it as the chapters were released (I got it a couple of days ago from another site), it's clear you've been developing as a developer :-)

There were a few minor things I thought didn't quite make sense, but this was a fun little story and very cute girls (I hate those weird pointy eyelashes Eve has though). 

Thanks for a few well-spent hours.

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This was was nice. While it's similar to another game, I'm really looking forward to where you decide to go with. The fourth chapter was the best of them. You can really see how much extra effort you put into it. It was worth it.

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Short but well done.

Glad to hear you will be making this into a series. If I'm honest I would have preferred it all to be one game, but I take it this wasn't planned and now it would be awkward with the name and all. I don't mind though.

I assume you don't have enough time for Easter Daye, haha. I am curious about how you are going to continue the project. While this worked well for the first game, I don't think "one girl per game" approach will make sense from here on out story-wise.

Looking forward to what you do next!


P.S.

You gave a shoutout to Lockheart at the end, would you have any links to share?

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Ok this one was good and so much potential for sequels/seasons. Maybe a sequel for each girl while slowly building relationships with the others is nice. Finish it off with a nice harem time and explore a few kinks along the way. Take it step farther and give pregnancy options for the girls.(for those who like that stuff) =]

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Compliment ! This Game is made with love . Like it very much

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Kaylee needs a happy ending, the sad music combined with Evie and her jokes makes it that much sadder.

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I know! I feel bad for her, too! She's such a sweetheart and really deserves to be happy. I'll see what I can do to fix things in the next story in this series.

Please do not hear what the others say ! the game is amazing , the christmassy music fits too . Please continue ! (aloha1960 , hawaii4560)

Can you log in by SubscribeStar . I can support you there !!!

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I downloaded yesterday and played straight through in a couple hours. I took a chance on a new creator due to the uncanny likeness Eve has to a person in my real life that I happen to have a huge crush on. It's actually unreal how much they look alike. 


Anyway, I was very pleasantly surprised! It was a very fun, cute, little story. 


Positives: 

Images are of great quality. The renders look great for the most part and are very easy and pleasant to look at. 

Pacing was appropriate for a story of this length. A good amount of buildup before any adult scenes is good but some creators take this too far and pump out two years of content with a quarterly update with barely any teases of anything more to come. This isn't that. There's plenty of steak here with the sizzle although it didn't feel too rushed. 

At the end of chapter 3, I was wanting moremoremore! Evie is addicting and makes the viewer never want her story to end. 

There's enough ancillary characters that make you curious about future releases of not only this title but a potential "Jonesy Universe" of games hopefully. 


Cons: I don't have much to offer that hasn't already been mentioned elsewhere unfortunately. 

The closeups on some of the naughty bits were a bit disappointing. They seemed to be very basic or rushed and less detail put into them than some of the gorgeous closeups of Evie's face or set dressing. 

I'll be that guy; the lack of feet content. I'm sorry to those who "aren't into it" or are repulsed by the fetish but I've got to mention it. Evelynn has got simply gorgeous feet. I mean truly stunning. So I kept hoping there would be an option/pathway that would allow me to enjoy those pretty little soles and toes. I hope someday we are able to do that in some capacity!

The payoff of what Evie pulls out of the drawer never showed up. After the scene when she takes it, she shows up in a skirt and I thought, "Oh man. She's wearing that plug." But you find out later that she isn't. And she never does. Although I ASSUME that will be payed off in the last chapter. Or hope so at the very least! HAHA

My biggest issue (and it wasn't that big!) is with the dialogue. Some of the dialogue was a bit unbelievable to me. I would have liked if Evie were just a bit more shy and nervous given the subject matter. I think she came across as a bit too forward for me to suspend my disbelief. And at certain moments I actually chuckled a bit and thought, "Okay. No one would ever say that. These are not things that people just say." While I understand that a bit of humor is a part of the genre here, I just think at times, the dialogue took me a bit out of it. While I know these kinds of works are passion projects, I might consider you enlist the help of a bit of an editor or somehow engage with a test audience before future releases to get that detailed feedback. 


OVERALL:


I really liked this. Enough to even create an itchdotio account to leave this review/feedback! I couldn't be more pleased to have found this a day or two before Valentine's Day as now I'm so incredibly excited to finish this story in a couple of days!


Thank you for your art, your hard work, and dedication to bringing this and future releases to life. You've won me over as a fan and I will be following your career with great interest! 

<3 c:

Hey Itchanon,

Thanks for all the input. I really appreciate it! I'm so glad to hear you liked the story and I hope that you like what I have in store for you in chapter 4.

As you already know, this is my first attempt at this type of project. I have come to see this as 2 separate stories. One being the obvious story called "Christmas Eve", and the other, more subtle story, is the one about myself progressing as a developer. I started this in August and already I am looking back at chapter 1 and thinking, "Man, I made some hits, but I definitely missed the mark a few times, too." I personally like that. It's like an accidental journal. 

Anyway, I am still working hard, but I will not be able to meet my target release date of 2/14. I blame it on my characters. They keep hijacking the story and making me write/render/code more scenes! I'm getting to the last scene as of this morning. Hopefully I'm going to have it done by this coming weekend, but we'll see.

Thanks again for all the support. I hope to hear from you soon!


-Jonesy

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Hey Falauren! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I want you to know I am definitely going through the whole story a few times and fixing any typos I can find before releasing chapter 4. I understand how distracting they can be. 

Textbox opacity slider has been added!

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Hi dev is  pregnancy  planned? Also if you plan to include lesbian content make it avoidable or give the opportunity to prevent girls from being lesbians. I don't know why most games don't have the opportunity to avoid it.

Hey, thanks for checking out the game. I hope you've enjoyed it so far. While I can't make any promises, I don't currently have any plans for pregnancy content and none of my current female characters are lesbians. That said, they may have messed around with each other from time to time just for fun. Generally, I try to let my characters dictate what they want to do and I try to think about what would seem at least somewhat natural or realistic as far as what I imagine their personalities to be. I feel that by doing it this way, the story writes itself. Will we meet a lesbian or pregnant character in the future? Maybe. I guess we'll have to wait and see.

What about impregnation with the MC being the father?

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It's not currently on my radar, but I like to keep my options open.

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The whole story is amazingly enthralling and heart-warming and, courtesy of delightful little Evey, completely and utterly enchanting in every aspect. In particular though "The Glimmering" movie night scene was, for me, the most brilliant of all the brilliantly done scenes. To be able to and then to actually succeed so  convincingly in conveying such tenderness and sensitivity, both in your writing and, in particular, the way you have not only rendered everything, but most notably of all, Eve's breath taking eyes in the firelight as she sat in her Dad's lap has been a truly rare and, in my own personal experience, unique feeling for my heart, for me and hopefully for all who are fortunate enough to discover you and this absolute masterpiece. This is a truly amazing accomplishment.

You should be so very proud of your creativity, imagination, your capabilities and, above all , your sensibilities. You simply MUST, I implore you, follow through on this story to the very end. I am not a wealthy person, but I paid $30 for the pleasure of Chapter 3, because this, for me, is all I can afford to pay for a gift which, in truth, is, to me, absolutely priceless. This whole story will be, I feel sure, an experience I shall cherish and subsequently cherish with each new chapter right to the very end of this already pulsatingly heart-warming tale.

Please do your best to remain energised. Please continue to write all that your heart is clearly telling you to write and with the exact same warmth and sensitivity you have done so inspiringly thus far and please, please, please do continue to illustrate it, at the very least, to the stratospheric level you have already attained or perhaps if possible (although I have no idea how you might achieve it) even higher. There is no sky left to limit you, Jonesy...

Discovering this been the biggest juiciest, sweetest, most succulent cherry on my Christmas and New Year cake. Thank you so much, (Mr?Ms?) Jonesy for blessing me, and of course, us all, with Evey at Christmas! Stay happy, stay healthy and, please, stay focused, keeping that magic wand and spell book at your side at all times...
Happy New Year and, of course, roll on Valentine's Day!

Thank you so much for all the praise! I am not the type of person that accepts praise very well, but it does mean a lot to me, so thanks. I also really appreciate the donation. That will definitely help purchase more goodies for upcoming chapters/projects (this stuff gets expensive quick!). 

I really have tried my best to make the conversations feel natural and to convey through dialog, thoughts, and actions how much the characters truly love each other outside of the naughty stuff they get into. I'm happy to hear that I succeeded with that on at least some level.

I haven't written the script out properly for chapter 4 just yet, but I have a collection of ideas and directions I want to explore. At this point though, it seems like the characters are calling the shots. I'm just  going to start rendering and writing and see where they lead me. I'm sure wherever they take us, it will be a fun time that will also get you right in the feels. Until then, be safe!

Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!

-Jonsey

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With me, criticism or praise is generated purely on merit and to the degree to which it strikes me. Both are always earned, never volunteered, no matter what the benefits or inducements.

Anyway, as I said before, for whatever reason, "Christmas Eve" has totally spontaneously struck a profoundly resonant chord in me, presenting as it does, a brilliant and joyous validation of two of my own deep-seated, personal beliefs;

Firstly, that "the heart knows no bounds" and my own (here shared) assertion that, behind closed doors and exclusively between indisputably consenting adults, it should not be required to either, regardless of human society's futile artificial attempts to restrict and suppress it.

Secondly, that in the very best of novels, story and characters are so well crafted that the latter, within the confines of the story structure itself, can, to a great extent, actually influence and dictate their own actions, interactions and reactions thereby effectively writing their own dialogue too. 

So, I'm really, really looking forward to future developments (no hurry...quality over speed always) with both fascination and, of course, no little excitement and by that I do not mean solely THAT kind of excitement. I am equally encouraged that you seem to be very relaxed in your approach. I think ideas and innovations flow more freely when the mind is relaxed, open and positively engaged rather than closed and narrowly focused and thereby pressurised predominantly, if not entirely, by expectation of results and their associated deadlines.

So, please do continue to "Keep Calm and Carry On", as my tea mug reminds me every morning and I'll continue, with each subsequent chapter, to donate what I can to help support this, my current favourite, cause.

Anyone here that uses JoiPlay to play this on mobile. Did you manage to get the game running? Or is it also crashing no matter what with JoiPlay, really want to play this game but just not a fan of playing VNs on PCs

Ur download shows an android icon but there is no apk file from the download

Sorry about that. Thanks for letting me know. I'll try to get it ported to Android soon. In the meantime, I fixed the icon.

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Love the game and if there is a follow up to it. It would make for a good harem VN centered around the MC, his stepdaughters, their friend who thinks the MC is hot and the late wife’s best friend who is watching the other stepdaughter.

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You and I think a lot alike! ;P

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what is your pateron link

Sorry! I'll have that up soon. Still getting all that set up. Thanks!

the mega link wont load properly that might just be me but idk.

nvm it loaded it only took it 17 minuets

Great job! I like the dialog between the MC and Eve. It seems more realistic than most VNs I've played. Looking forward to chapter 2. Any idea of a release date?

Hey, thanks for the support!  I tried to make the style of the banter back and forth as close as possible to real conversations I've had or overheard. I'm rendering my butt off right now. My goal is to have chapter 2 done by the middle to late November, but we'll see. I'll try to keep everyone up to date in the Dev Log. Thanks again!

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Please feel free to leave me some feedback. I'd love to know what you think of the story so far.